Friday, September 25, 2009

Walk with me...

Walk with me,
to know where am leading to.
Walk with me,
to know what am going through.
Walk with me on the lonely road,
and hear the whispers of the empty sky.

Watching me from a far away land,
wont help you find,
the lost one in my mind.

Walk with me,
and help me know,
the lost meaning of life.
Be with me,
and help me forget,
the feeling of betrayal,
that's growing in me more.

I am lost in mid-way,
in the journey called life.
Show me the path,
and show me a goal,
show me myself
that I have been searching for...

6 comments:

  1. At the age of 19.... oops 21 i never knew you are crippled, blind and dumb. How else am i to deciper the line like walk with me (why do you need a support)...
    This repeated mention of betrayal acutally paints you like K serials forever crying lead heroines...
    With the kind of insight you have about life and its philosophical paths...even buddha would be forced to find new means of enlightenment. HE required to sit under a tree and tehn understand life you have managed to do that by merely staring on the computer and sitting on the support of ill fitting cushion.... amazing...
    Girl you got talent but use it to write something other than betrayal, mind and morbid depression.

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  2. lol.... Sammy, wd this amazing skill of wrting comments, why dont u do somethin meaningful instead of wasting your time n cracking your head over my blog ..??? :P

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  3. now justifying the true cause of this blog....
    translation of the deeply sad and emotional english words to Hindi and lil urdu....

    Mere saat chalo ( that sounds like bossy wife)
    Yeh Jaan ne ke liye ki main kaha jaa rahi hoon (ok ok... now i know how was orange mobile company inspired to get the dog)

    Mere saat chalo
    Yeh jaane ke liye ke khis halat se guzar rahi hoon ( Bollywood oldie heroines have a tough competition to such dialgoues...maaaaa!!!)

    Mere saat chalo ( She is stuck to one line...writers block you see...)
    Un tanha raho par aur suno us khuskhusiyat ko viraan amber par ( imagination .... empty sky and wishpers.....ufff)

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  4. doooooor ek jahan se dekh kar (binoculars would come in handy in such times)
    nahi doond paaoge
    us shaqs ko jo mere antar atma main ghum ho chuka hain ( i am having absolute fun with this)

    Mere saat chalo ( hum cholega cholega.. kidor joyega....)
    Aur mere madad karo
    Khoye hue zindagi ke matlab ko ( Run .... she is walking zombie... searching for her life)
    Mere saat raho
    aur mujhe bhulne main madad karo
    bhulane ke liye
    us dhooke baazi ko
    jo mere andar ug raha hain ...( I knew about fetus grwoing inside but not something called dokhe baazi.... well its kaliyug...anything can happen)

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  5. main bheech mazdaar main kho chuki hoon
    is safar main jiska naam zindagi hain (Competition competion to Rajesh Khanna...babu moshaiiii..you are outdated....)

    Mujhe raasta dikhaooo... (so the bossy wife has lost her power and now she is a toothless tigress..)
    Mujh ek lakshya do (God one lakshya from your doomed life is making you write such poetries, another lakshya would be a disaster)
    mujhe apne aap ko dikhav ( the persistent usage of office mirror seems to be of little help)
    jisko main khoj rahi hoon ( I dread what she could be searching at the age of 60-70.... done for today....Oh poetess continue the good workd)

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  6. lolz.....Sameera did ultimate balatkaar of my emotions....

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